Video Pitch Feedback

I presented my pitch the class and got feedback. Most of feedback was asking about the locations. "Do you the location, especially the field?" I have found a field I want to shoot my music video in which is a public field so we don't have to worry about permission.
I also got told that my idea of the music video is similar to the original music video. My music video will have a story line instead of Taylor Swift's which is just random home footage of her and her family and friends.
 I got questioned about how I would film in a super market. I already have permission to film in a supermarket so that won't be a problem.



Mood Board

I have created a mood board to show how I would want to represent my music video. In my mood board, I have chosen an image of a woman in the streets. I would want my video to be located in the streets. I have gone for the rock star look which shows a bit more old fashioned type clothing. I have chosen to put a guitar in my mood board because in my music video, I imagine the lead singer with a guitar. I imagine people hanging around in the streets having a good time, that is why I have an image of girls on the streets. For make-up, I thought dark eyeshadow would work best because I am going for the "rock chick" look. Overall I am going for a street party, old fashioned rock star outcome.